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Revision as of 10:19, 16 January 2025 by Keith (talk | contribs) (Tone, and page structure: new section)
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Tone, and page structure[edit source]

The tone of this article isn't quite there - it makes several accusatory statements in the Wiki's voice, which is not ideal. Additionally, the current content is much less a company page, and more an incident page

- Keith